Yes orcs, the old man saw them too,then said”Come along children dinners ready.” So we went with him and the orcs didn’t even see us! We went into a small house and saw three kids. They were named Zack,Kitly and Tom. Did I mention that they were born with cat ears and a cat tails! I think that Zack is a cutie but he’s way to old for me. I saw Kitly give Jason a look of love ,so I gave her a look that said stay away or die! I was pretty proud till she gave me a look that was full of hate and menace, evil kitty!Then we had dinner,wich was pink noodles in a purple sauce with a piece of all red cheesecake. I saw tom give me and Ellia a look of love and thought oh great now a 9 year old loves me!
To be continued!!!!!!!
This is the frist page or two in my Dogon Trails story. I hope you like it.
“Homerunnnnn!” Whats that smell, is it salt? Why are there moldy floorboards and not dirt below me, and why is no one cheering? I opened my eyes and saw that I was on a dock and that people like things were staring at me! They were creepy, some looked like lizards and cats, but most looked like dogs and bats, man I hate bats, evil bats, evil evil bats. Three kids were standing next to me.”Ellia!!!” I yelled and only got crazy looks for almost all the bat people in return, as I said evil bats.I gave Ellia a hug and looked at the two boys standing next to her. They were staring at on old man, I mean really old he looked at least 125.He was staring back at us and moving his hand like he wanted us to follow him and we did! Then I saw something weirder then the evil bat people! They were orcs!
to be continued!
The dude who took care of us just after we blinked had a dread lock beard that looked like tentacles, it was creepy. Ellias is cute , i’m 13. I wish I wasn’t here my brother hates me and no one will let me fight, it’s annoying! Well bye for now.P.S. The old person is seven feet tall, has 8 fingers on each hand and has pink skin, it’s creepy!
This is the third in my series of proloues.Please post comments on these I still haven’t finshed the first chapter.
Dude,i’m Jason,i’m 14. I have one bro,Sam. I’m one of the coolest boys in my school.I love dogs and I have a crush on Sofia, don’t tell her, plaese don’t tell her or i’ll have to kill you.P.S. My brother thinks I hate him ,but really I think he’s really cool.
So this is my second prologue in the Dogon Trails story.So I hope you like it.
“Nooooooooo!” Was the last word I hread before I blinked. Sofia and I are on diffrent baseball teams,and my team had just lost! I’m 13,I have two little sisters and a older brother. I miss them a lot. My favorite animal is the cheetah. Bye for now.
So I just started to write a new book/like story and so now I putting on Zooangel.com.I really hope that some of you like it and please post comments,well here goes nothing.
”Homerun!”Was last word I (Sofia Willowwood) heard before I blinked.Ellia (my best friend) and I play on baseball teams.This is the story of how I became a D.G.! So listen up! I know this didn’t start strong,but I never thought that I would have to write a whole story. There are four of us Me,Ellia,Jason and Sam. We are all D.G.s, oh by the way D.G. stands for Dragon Guards. See you soon! P.S. there are four prologues,then I tell the story.
